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Well, It was a bit slow and anctually kinda boring, since a thiers a ton of shooting things on the web (but thats besides the point) Even though it is your first movie, maybe you could try not copying so many pictures and using them and try to draw it, and the bullets were quite slow, it looked like an animated ant, not a bullet...
Author's Response:
ok thanks for the good advice.
for the next one i will make the bullets faster and not so much like ants
thanks!
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It Could Use some work though, I see a shadow in a different place (probably you or whoever/whatever was taking the picture) moving as if you stand in a different place every pic, i dont know much about claymation, but im pretty sure that shouldnt happen, also, i saw someone in the background a few times, so maybe work on a backdrop that blocks everything, since that pillow seemed to do you no good... Nice try though :3
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This was the first claymation i have ever made and i am only 11 so it was a pretty good try, right.
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You shouldve used your cat as a hat!
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Its alot better than the other one, and theres alot if action in this too... but the speed is still slightly off XDXD
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thanks bud.
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Nice, TIs is really good, could be a bit longer but it was one of the funnyest things ive seen all day!
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lol
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Thats really cool...
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it was a great try... but it really at this moment... well... sucks... First off... i thought it was spam because of the file size... Also... its really hard to see what hes doing... i had to search my screen for a minute to find the guy... SO theres one thing to do... make it larger (or atleast give a zoom option) also... second... put some sound into it... that would make it more dramatic to hear everyone screaming when he jumps off... Ok? thats all i can think of ATM... so... nice try...
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This was just as good as the first one, i wish it was a little bit longer, BUT THIS ABSOLUTELY WAS WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!!!! lol, i cant wait for the next one!
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this hase to be one of your oddest ones yet, GREAT JOB!!
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the first part was, but the second part wasnt. that was a slideshow (a crappy one )... also... i think thier is enough naruto flashes (and stupid naruto things) here on ng... we dont need more... try again with a REAL FLASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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